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Another Regret

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Jun. 2nd, 2008 | 05:43 pm
posted by: iamdemented in 100drabble

Hey, this is my first time writing something in exactly 100 words. Tell me what you think of it, yes?

Author : iamdemented
Title : Another Regret
Rating : G

 

I watched her walk away into the crowd, melting into the mass of faceless people, becoming another regret. The twilight sky was a stoic riot of red and violet and gold, as the city roared its usual rush hour roar. She did not turn, nor did she hesitate in her stride. She went on, placidly and calmly, not at all unlike how she first appeared.

Unfortunate how that is.

So I walk along the river, its waters murky grey and disconsolate, bathed in the glory of the dying sun, setting languidly in horizon, as she walked away with my heart.

 

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from: veryberry_19
date: Jan. 10th, 2010 10:17 pm (UTC)
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I wandered into the community and picked yours as the first Drabble to read. I enjoyed it a lot, particularly the use of colours in your descriptions. I think you've painted your picture well.

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