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Prompt 10/A: Gone

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Jun. 3rd, 2008 | 06:13 pm
posted by: exosomatic in 100drabble

Author: exosomatic
Title: Little Eva
Rating: G
Category & Prompt: 10 Words/A (Gone)
Author's comment: Why in the world I keep writing about a baby!

Little Eva was missing for 32 days, 8 hours, 23 minutes. She did not know, however. Little Eva was little in so many ways; she was only 5 months, 18 days, 2 hours, 41 minutes old. She knows not of who her parents were, although she would probably greet them with her toothless smile when they cuddle her in relief. She knows not that she was taken, for she was being treated like she was their own child. Little Eva’s new parents, a man and a woman of 33 and 37, who have craved for a baby of their own.

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from: iamdemented
date: Jun. 3rd, 2008 10:57 am (UTC)

Hmmm...Poor little Eva. I'm sure she is an adorable child.

I like how this one has a sort of stoic, refined feel to it. It makes babysnatching sound perfectly innocent. Hence, making it all the more disturbing.

Yes. Disturbing is good.

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